A Cover of Stay ...(GASP!)

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Apr 06, 2003 3:32 pm

yea you do you fuckin liein sack.......you pmed me "twice" yesterday to fuckin download your "last chop"......I know you dont come close to tim, but on your leads I can tell that you are trying to copy tim's, so dont give me your bullshit..

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Unread post by billywestom » Sun Apr 06, 2003 4:34 pm

i didnt read all the replies here, cause they seemed to have nothing to do with the song, but i just wanted to say that i think stay is probably the hardest song to play and sing along to...
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Unread post by jsgksu » Sun Apr 06, 2003 5:07 pm

Can you put this back up, I didnt get a chance to d/l it and I wanna hear it.
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Unread post by ticohans » Sun Apr 06, 2003 5:20 pm

dang, jason, do you have any friends? fire goes out of his way and spends his time on your little cover and says the guitars are great and the vocals need work, and you blow up on him. way to be an asshole. you need to relax and take whatever it is that you have shoved up your butt. fire was in no way insulting or derrogatory in his first post. he took his time to listen to your recording, just like you want people to. what the hell do you expect from people??

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Apr 06, 2003 5:31 pm

.tico, I really dont want to start shit with you...and you dont have all the data, so I would stay out of this....because I still want to keep it cool...and I would hope that you would take the time to listen to my songs and critique them as I think it will help me.........but I really don't want a little spoiled brat like fire, with his mommy buying him thousands of dollars of guitars and toys for his computer, telling me that I "need work"....well yea, thanks a lot......I guess I will just wonder about what I was doing wrong......however, the other guys that replied gave reasons, that can help me...I dont want some critique saying that I "need work"...

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Sun Apr 06, 2003 5:41 pm

DmbFanJason wrote:hey guys...thanks for the replies...so about this range thing...what parts are you talking about exactly...like about the last part with the really high "stay"s??? they were a little quiet I have to admit, but I know that once I get this breathing thing down like Tico talked about it, it will sound better...anyway, let me know...late.
I'm not saying that you sounded off, I really enjoyed it actually..... I'm just saying that personally I found it alot easier to develop my voice after i realised that I should be singing in my own voice, not dave's..just trying to help man. :D

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Unread post by ticohans » Sun Apr 06, 2003 6:26 pm

ok, jason, let's keep this cool. i understand what you're saying, but it's no reason to go off like that on fire. you can simply say, "hey, what was wrong with the voice?" instead of insulting him.

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Unread post by Brock » Sun Apr 06, 2003 6:30 pm

jsgksu wrote:Can you put this back up, I didnt get a chance to d/l it and I wanna hear it.
Ya, I was out for a few days and missed it. Any chance of puttin it back up or IM'ing it to me and I'll have it on my FTP...
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Sun Apr 06, 2003 8:10 pm

well Jason, "your vocals need work"...it speaks for itself...I never said I am better - frankly I don't need to prove it to you because I see you opinion as worthless - but thats beside the point...your vocals on this song need some work...and you even said so yourself - but instead of taking it and weening what you can from it, you take immediate defense...do what you will and I won't bother anymore, but I will say this -

everything that I have from guitars, to pedals, to any other equipment I have paid for in full, so don't go off with your limited inteligence, you might get yourself hurt like that :lol: - lates!
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