...I think I figured it out though...now, it's not perfect as I just learned it(FINALLY)....I had to think while singing too which is never good(esp vocally).. 
vocals ......i dont know, fuck it...tell me what yall think.......... yea....I was holding a little back because I had to focus on not fucking up the guitar part...i dont want to do them seperately because I want to practice them at the same time as much as I can...thats the way to do it IMO...LOL, I found at the end of the song I was moving my feet, I guess you kinda just have to move your feet while playing DMB because it just makes you wanna dance...ESPECIALLY Stay....when I get the guitar part down I'll be able to let it all out....I will also be practicing on the breathing too, so we'll see how that goes....thanks though...all other comments are Velcome...lateAdamCU81 wrote:sounds good overall. Guitar is right on. It sounds like you might be tense when you sing though. If you record vocals and guitar as seperate tracks, you might want to try bouncing up and down on the balls of your feet while your singing. That's what I do to get rid of the tension. If you're more relaxed, you'll be able to hit the higher notes better. But this is a very picky comment. Sounded good to me.
thanks for the comment that the vocals just "need work"...that helps a lot...at least I tried to help you in yours...but I guess being in tune is just a natural talent, that you lack...firedancer86 wrote:comment "V"elcome eh? hehe...sounds just like the cd (guitar)...the vocals...need work...it will come in time...
I thought you could play them all Jason
I never really liked the song so I decided to never learn it...I would like to do the D&T style 6/8 time prog. to it...
I did not say that my vocals "needed work"...I said, I know that I was holding back......what the hell am I supposed to do with ..."you need work"...well how much? on what? ..............get what i'm saying....thats not the same at all dude...gregplaysguitar wrote:jason, I thought it was very good......but don't get pissed at fire for saying exactly what you said.......you said in yourself that you were holding back......Fire basically said the same thing you did.......Relax man.....you beg for critiques ( yes, i've been known to do this too ) so don't get pissed when they give you feed back you don't want to hear.
Yeah you shithead, your vocals need work on that song...just practice more and they will get even better...and no problem, I don't need to listen to your zeroxes anymore...bla-dee...lates!DmbFanJason wrote:I did not say that my vocals "needed work"...I said, I know that I was holding back......what the hell am I supposed to do with ..."you need work"...well how much? on what? ..............get what i'm saying....thats not the same at all dude...gregplaysguitar wrote:jason, I thought it was very good......but don't get pissed at fire for saying exactly what you said.......you said in yourself that you were holding back......Fire basically said the same thing you did.......Relax man.....you beg for critiques ( yes, i've been known to do this too ) so don't get pissed when they give you feed back you don't want to hear.
firedancer86 wrote:Yeah you shithead, your vocals need work on that song...just practice more and they will get even better...and no problem, I don't need to listen to your zeroxes anymore...bla-dee...lates!DmbFanJason wrote:I did not say that my vocals "needed work"...I said, I know that I was holding back......what the hell am I supposed to do with ..."you need work"...well how much? on what? ..............get what i'm saying....thats not the same at all dude...gregplaysguitar wrote:jason, I thought it was very good......but don't get pissed at fire for saying exactly what you said.......you said in yourself that you were holding back......Fire basically said the same thing you did.......Relax man.....you beg for critiques ( yes, i've been known to do this too ) so don't get pissed when they give you feed back you don't want to hear.
DmbFanJason wrote:firedancer86 wrote:Yeah you shithead, your vocals need work on that song...just practice more and they will get even better...and no problem, I don't need to listen to your zeroxes anymore...bla-dee...lates!DmbFanJason wrote:I did not say that my vocals "needed work"...I said, I know that I was holding back......what the hell am I supposed to do with ..."you need work"...well how much? on what? ..............get what i'm saying....thats not the same at all dude...gregplaysguitar wrote:jason, I thought it was very good......but don't get pissed at fire for saying exactly what you said.......you said in yourself that you were holding back......Fire basically said the same thing you did.......Relax man.....you beg for critiques ( yes, i've been known to do this too ) so don't get pissed when they give you feed back you don't want to hear.
once again, thanks for your help, you little spoiled brat.
I don't Im you with my songsDmbFanJason wrote:yea, well don't come PMing me to listen to your shit either........firedancer86 wrote:
.and no problem, I don't need to listen to your zeroxes anymore...bla-dee...lates!
and dont talk to me about "xeroxes" the closer to tim you get the better it sounds...you are a xerox of tim reynolds...
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