Feedback or whatever on a little guitar of mine

[SamBob]

Just wondering if anyone thinks this works-The intro sucks kinda( This was done in 5 minutes---NUENDO ROCKS~!) anyways I really just wanted to know if people thought the time signature worked. --> 7/8 8/8 6/8 7/8 and then the usual 6/8 chorus. AND HOLY crap I cant write a melody for the verse, so if anyone has any good strategies or words of wisdom for writing in weird time signatures, let me know! THANKS

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[daxman]

Apparently somebody violated the terms of Angelfire...