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JacknCoke
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by JacknCoke » Sun Mar 28, 2004 9:50 pm
i like, i like it a lot actually..sounds like something i would hear at the end of a song that just keeps on going instrumentally
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by Lennox » Mon Mar 29, 2004 6:50 pm
Overall, I think the song is pretty solid and flows together well. I would point out that at 1:43, there really needs to be a small transition into that section. I was really getting into the music and enjoying the patterns and then all of a sudden this spot that didn't sound like it belong was there.
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by Sheesh » Mon Mar 29, 2004 7:06 pm
I'm loving the song man. It's a really pretty ballad that sounds like something that could easily be used to serenade the shit out of your girlfriend!

. The tune kinda reminds me of that song they use in those diamond commercials. I think its for Debeers? Not sure though.
Keep up the good work Pat.
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by dmbguitar718 » Mon Mar 29, 2004 7:21 pm
Lennox wrote:Overall, I think the song is pretty solid and flows together well. I would point out that at 1:43, there really needs to be a small transition into that section. I was really getting into the music and enjoying the patterns and then all of a sudden this spot that didn't sound like it belong was there.
i know exactly what you mean. i'm in the process of writing a different bridge now, because i just plain dont like the current one. i dont really like using open chords like that, it just sounds too plain. but yeah, i wrote that really quick, just because i wanted to get the song recorded. honestly, when i plugged in my guitar, i didnt know exactly what i was going to play for the bridge.
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by katie » Mon Mar 29, 2004 9:51 pm
that sounds so sweet.
love speaks the loudest even in silent ways - reverberating the sky escaping time.
really nice, thank you for sharing.
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by mbgreen » Mon Mar 29, 2004 10:06 pm
That song is rad Pat. I sat here and just played neat little melody riffs to it for the last half hour. Fun song man. I dig it a lot...just polish up that transition, and youll be golden.
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by ElGuitarrista » Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:18 am
This was a nice tune... it's a keeper for my hard drive. I especially like when that slide riff kicks in... like at 0:35. Is that one guitar throughout, or two?
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by rampaged.congt » Tue Mar 30, 2004 9:15 am
very nice man...thanks for putting that one online
really smooth and very beautiful...
Damn I can't stop listening to the song...WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!

keep up the good work!
(I'd like to know if that is one guitar throughout or two, too)
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by dmbguitar718 » Tue Mar 30, 2004 2:53 pm
Thanks guys.

The song is two guitars, throughout. Keep in mind that I am changing the bridge to it just because...well you know why. It sucks bascially. I want to go over to the studio and record with better quality and possibly with a piano track that comes in later.

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