Winter Bird

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Unread post by markTR » Wed Feb 09, 2011 4:12 pm

I recorded one of my songs for kicks. Just a cheap condenser mic and me, so its pretty scrappy. Would appreciate any feedback

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Unread post by Banjobach » Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:50 pm

No real critiques here. I thought it was solid. Guitar playing was steady and relatively clean. Your vocals were breathy, but seems like that was what you were going for. Towards the end when you're singing "around around around" it felt like you should have put more power behind your voice, the way you sang it felt like you were holding back, or like there was someone sleeping in the next room and you didn't want to get too loud, but everything else was nicely done.
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