Re-did Crash, added Tripping B, Satellite. please Critique

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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Wed Feb 25, 2004 6:01 pm

its so funny, when he brought that up about "girls just wanna have fun" i listened to myself on crash then i thought... "Well maybe i could do a Mraz cover" haha. Satellite and Tripping Billies now works on the site.
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thnx again DJR07, horsmar15, Matty Boom, Jc, and Versacci41 for the imput, means alot.
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Unread post by Jc » Wed Feb 25, 2004 10:26 pm

"Sattelite" and "Tripping Billes" covers, me likes :) You shouldn't have been hiding them! BTW, you picked up a guitar only 8 months ago???? I can really tell now hearing all the songs that you are putting in lot's of practice and effort. You are doing great for that short of a time. Yowsa. I still would like to hear your voice without the Dave"isms" though. Good work overall man.

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Unread post by Jc » Wed Feb 25, 2004 10:45 pm

Hey I thought this might help you a bit in the vocal direction of "Crash" Take a listen of the poster Chris Powell's rendition

http://www.cpowellonline.com/

Notice that he sings it higher when it's needed but also brings it lower at the appropriate time. I think that would help out your cover quite a bit. I understand the comfort zone of singing in a certain key, I used to try it safer but then I discovered in my case I'm told I sound similar to John Mayer so... I try my best to change up the vocals to bring something a little different to the table.

Hey if you wouldn't mind, turn the tables a bit and give a listen to my quickie version of "Why did you mess with forever" and tell me if you liked anything about it or just wanted to clean your ears out after. :p

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Unread post by Buck23 » Thu Feb 26, 2004 2:01 pm

Crash was amazing, whoever mentioned james taylor was dead on...great guitar on billies, the vocal rhythm was off a little on parts of the chorus, but individual touches aint nothing to get rid of...I didnt notice the dave imitating thing on crash at all, I thought it was there a little on billies...maybe it's because that song jumps aound in pitch so much. anyways, two sweet covers overall.

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Unread post by chosta » Thu Feb 26, 2004 3:21 pm

i really like your voice man - you could def pull off a mraz cover. try i'll do anything. i've been wanting to do it but i dont think i have the chops for it
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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Thu Feb 26, 2004 4:43 pm

I'll definatly look in to the song, thnx alot guys. Im very flattered!
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Unread post by rlightrouge » Fri Feb 27, 2004 6:46 pm

I'd say stop trying to sound like Dave. It sounds like you're Jimmy Fallon doing a bad impression of Dave. I probably sound like an asshole, as usual, but don't take this in a bad way. I would say you have a lot of potential if you actually have only been playing for 8 months, and to develp your own voice. Guitar is pretty good, but keep practicing.

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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Fri Feb 27, 2004 8:51 pm

yes, closing in on 9 months now. I think when ever i sing to anyones song, whether its Sarah Mclachlan or 50Cent (kind of a joke, but not really) i try to sound like them. I'm pretty sure i know what my real voice is, but i could be wrong... still searching.
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Unread post by Raif2032 » Thu Mar 11, 2004 11:22 am

Please, don't post any sarah mac covers then...please, god, please.


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Unread post by MaveDatthews » Thu Mar 11, 2004 6:18 pm

haha
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