spoon cover, please critique

[howyadoin]

good afternoon, attached is a cover of spoon. Any critque or comments are welcome and would also be helpful in helping me improve. Thanks,


http://www.sendspace.com/file/alppee

[markTR]

Listening now. Guitar sounds good, nice job with that. Some of the phrasing in the vocals sounds a bit off, but nothing to serious.

Did you try going into a falsetto at the end of the chorus at all, with the "laughing out loud makes the pain subside" part?

[howyadoin]

Thanks for listening. I didn't try to go into a falsetto on th laughing out loud part< i think i got scared i might screw up the notes when i was recording. I will definately have to try and work on that. In reference to the vocal phrasing, do you have any tips on ways I could improve? Thanks again,