ok...pros...you would have the voice if you sang it at regular key...
................the guitar would sound better if some of the notes were closer together (time wise)...it sound great...
ok, now the cons (constructive cons of course

)...you sang it SO low, that it sounds near rediculousy different

the guitar was spaced too far apart for an actual sense of rhythm, and thats about all...
I WOULD LOVE SO MUCH (and think you could do it well) if you were to bring those vocals up and put some foot tappin beat to it...just my 2 cents...
SUMMARY: GOOD, but we need to hear you do the real thing now (because hearing you play and sing, I know you could!)