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jseymour_va
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by jseymour_va » Sun Feb 01, 2004 2:40 pm
I found a live, faster, solo guitar version of this song. Just want some feedback on some parts that I might need to work on.
Thanks,
james
http://66.160.65.114/kristina.mp3
P.S. Howie Day is playing here in Va @ the Norva on the 5th of Feb and a friend of mine's wife works at the radio station where he is plaing a live, solo show for about 25 people. She got me tickets to that show, how cool is that

I'll get the see him play 2 times in one day.
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by horsmar15 » Sun Feb 01, 2004 4:45 pm
Pretty good job, guitar was pretty good and your voice has a nice tone. The only thing is that your pitch goes flat every once in a while, more often in the verse. The chorous was actually sung very well, it's just the low parts of the song that could use a little work. practice this one a bit and it should sound really great.
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by JacknCoke » Wed Feb 04, 2004 3:46 am
Well, you did a good job on the song..But IMHO, I didn't like it played at the speed you played it at..I just couldnt get into the song the same way I would of if you would have played it at a slower speed. Thats just my opinion, the guitar alone was very well, the voice was pretty good for the most part....except for the song speed, id say you did a good job
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jseymour_va
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by jseymour_va » Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:52 pm
JacknCoke wrote:Well, you did a good job on the song..But IMHO, I didn't like it played at the speed you played it at..I just couldnt get into the song the same way I would of if you would have played it at a slower speed. Thats just my opinion, the guitar alone was very well, the voice was pretty good for the most part....except for the song speed, id say you did a good job
Sometimes I play it a lot slower, but when I record something I never hit the parts that well that I do when I'm not recording. I think in some ways I get a little nerves knowing somebody will here it

Thanks for the feedback.
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Raif2032
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by Raif2032 » Tue Feb 10, 2004 1:21 pm
Hey, good to see a fellow musician from VB! Yeah, I wanted to go to the Howie Day concert to hear some more of his music, but I didn't get to, oh well.
The Song: I thought the vocals were really well done and fit the song very well. The guitar sounded pretty good as well...i'd like to hear a DMB cover like Halloween or Deed is Done...think your voice would sound pretty good on them.
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