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new song check it out

Unread post by Brian M.D. » Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:56 pm

me and my friend jeff recorded a rough take of a song i wrote a few weeks ago tonight....i played guitar and bass and jeff played drums. i wrote some lyrics but they were later determined to suck so i put a rough lead track over the song instead to fill in the empty spaces. once i get some lyrics down im gonna have a little solo in the style that the lead track is now. but anyways give it a listen and lemme know what you think!! ill give you my opinion i think its catchy but kind of sounds like weather channel music due to no words and kind of airy guitar tones...ill probably beef up the guitar tones a bit and add some synth or what not when i actually get a real track of this going.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=846083 click on one of the arrows next to track 1 to listen.
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Unread post by Brian M.D. » Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:57 pm

oh by the way it cuts off a little early for some reason
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Unread post by Klondog » Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:01 pm

I really like this. I'm a sucker for catchy little ditties like this one. I think fattening up the guitar tone a mite would be good, bt overall highly enjoyable, like to see how this one turns out
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Unread post by iha » Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:23 pm

haha, does sound like something they would play on the weather channel
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Unread post by onid41 » Sat Jun 21, 2008 7:59 am

:lol: weather channel

or the tv guide channel

but good stuff dude
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