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- Trading-Meister
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wow...well, the playing was very solid, not a hitch that i could hear....the voice though, when i first heard it, i didn't think i would enjoy it because the voice is somewhat unorthodox, but you stayed on key the entire song and i ended up liking it very much! keep rockin and let's see some more recordings soon!
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i did not mean to sound negative by unorthodox...pardon me for doing doing so...it was deeper i suppose than most voices and i thought that you would have trouble staying on key...does that make sense? again, sorry about that
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Hey Matt, I didnt take it as a harsh comment at all. I was just curious about what you meant. Again, thanks for listening and commenting. I've got a ton of originals that will be going up on my new professional website soon, so I may call on you for some critique if you don't mind. Take it easy!Matty Boom wrote:i did not mean to sound negative by unorthodox...pardon me for doing doing so...it was deeper i suppose than most voices and i thought that you would have trouble staying on key...does that make sense? again, sorry about that
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i'm always around to critique...just remember the golden rule of the forum, if you put stuff up and expect critiques, try and hop in and listen to some other people's too...so hit me up whenever you want me to listen
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Nice job, good song. You sounded a bit like Eddie Vedder at some parts. I don't know if this intentional or not. However, I think it was a good mix. The whole song didn't seem to be one big attempt to sound like him, it had a good blend of your own voice and some resemblances to Vedder.
Way to hit that note at 1:36... nice work.
Your vocals get better as the song progresses. When you come back in at about 2:28, it's pretty flawless. Great job.
I also agree with Horsmar, this would be a good choice for a live song, maybe at an open mic night or something, if you aren't already playing gigs.
Way to hit that note at 1:36... nice work.
Your vocals get better as the song progresses. When you come back in at about 2:28, it's pretty flawless. Great job.
I also agree with Horsmar, this would be a good choice for a live song, maybe at an open mic night or something, if you aren't already playing gigs.
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Thanks for all the feedback guys! As for playing this tune out....yes I certainly will. I've been playing gigs now for about 3 years in New Jersey and now New York City. Never tried this one before. Basically i learned it the night i recorded it. Anyway, thanks for the comments and you can count on me giving any music you all post some thoughts. Take it easy!GreedylilPig wrote:Nice job, good song. You sounded a bit like Eddie Vedder at some parts. I don't know if this intentional or not. However, I think it was a good mix. The whole song didn't seem to be one big attempt to sound like him, it had a good blend of your own voice and some resemblances to Vedder.
Way to hit that note at 1:36... nice work.
Your vocals get better as the song progresses. When you come back in at about 2:28, it's pretty flawless. Great job.
I also agree with Horsmar, this would be a good choice for a live song, maybe at an open mic night or something, if you aren't already playing gigs.
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This is nice , good feeling all the way through the song
Gave me this feeling i can't explain , good job , at 1:36 " Where it takes me " that outburst is just amazing 


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