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gix
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by gix » Thu Jan 01, 2004 12:20 pm
pretty dope dude. guitar is nice, vocals could be a bit better, a bit more like the original, not just what fits the chord if you know what i mean. But overall nice. i love this song. nice, man. 8)
Rock on, brother...i play guitar
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Matty Boom
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by Matty Boom » Thu Jan 01, 2004 3:32 pm
very well done, i like it...your recording setup sounds pretty good too...like gix said, the vocals weren't dead on, but no one says they have to be exactly like dave, i liked it because the vocals seemed to give it a little bit more originality, good work
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indigo
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by indigo » Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:29 am
I'll try to work on the vocals, I thought it was off too.

I strummed this song instead of the usual plucking to get some variety.
I'm pretty happy with the way it turned out

. Im hopin to upgrade my recording set up coz i dont have a pickup. That was just one mic put between my mouth and the guitar.
thanks
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TrippingBilly
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by TrippingBilly » Fri Jan 02, 2004 7:19 pm
Great job dude. Nice guitar -- like everyone else said, the vocals. You invented a new tune in a few sections, which made it a little more "yours" when you think about it. You also got rid of some of the parts of the song between verse/chorus where it was just guitar riff, which made things feel a little rushed. Overall a great performance.
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indigo
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by indigo » Wed Jan 07, 2004 1:29 am
I knew I fucked up the lyrics a bit. I dont really know the song that well
I'll work on it
thanks
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