you played everything at a steady tempo and you were right on with the rhythm, but you lacked in percussive accent with the main riff. the song lacked in real beat because you didn't put any percussive hits to accent the beat, it just felt empty this way
as for the second piece of advice, your voice was on key for the majority of the song (you only went off a little when you hit the high notes). your voice sounded really restricted and kind of nasally. it seemed as if you were restricting your breath a good bit. also the reverb on your vocals was a tad bit excessive
overall you did quite well and you played pretty solidly
you get a 6.75/10
